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Daisy saves herself lineart by Daisy-x-Bowser by PrincessDaisyRocks10 Daisy saves herself lineart by Daisy-x-Bowser by PrincessDaisyRocks10
✿Hope u like it!✿


✿Lineart by::icondaisy-x-bowser:
✿Colored by::iconprincessdaisyrocks10:
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Critique by no1samusfan Jan 17, 2013, 3:47:09 PM
Let me start by saying that this is a very good piece :). I like how the edges are nice and clean, and its realistic that if Daisy got captured again that she would save herself. But I have to say, that the eye whites could've been white, and the holes in the letters could've matched the background. But this is a really good piece of art. It is also very nice of you how you left the copyright stamp on the drawing :) The colors are exactly right, every detail of the dress and the gloves is correct. Again, this is really good :)

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✿ How do I start? :) It's really good because it's your art; art is your interpretation of things in life, and this is your interpretation of Daisy (more her colour scheme than the drawing because that was by me :D). ✿

✿ I would say my favourite part would be Daisy's dress and her pendants. Her face is a little strange because of her eyes as they might have looked better if they'd had a white part in them. I'm wondering what happened to Daisy's hair near her left earring because I think she must have got some highlights there! :) But it's good and I like the way that you did the crown on her head. ✿

✿ I gave the deviation a 4 for vision because the yellow mixes with the dress, maybe you could have drawn lines to stop the colour flooding the whole image? ✿
✿ I gave the deviation 3.5 for originality, but that's because it's a Mario character and that's the same slogan as one of the Peach T-Shirts (so I'd get that for my lineart too! :)) ✿
✿ I gave 3.5 for technique because there are a few tweaks you could make to the image, but they're mostly just the background mixing with the dress :)
✿ And lastly, I put 4.5 for the impact because I find it's very good in my opinion! :)

✿ And thanks for leaving the copyright thing in the corner of her dress XD ✿
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CrystalisZelda Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And not peach XD..
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PrincessPeach145 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
so cool
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Kincello Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she does save herself :icongreatjobplz:
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Luigiisawesom Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
and that is why she is awesome :)
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