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Submitted: January 17
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Daisy saves herself lineart by Daisy-x-Bowserby ~PrincessDaisyRocks10

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Critique by ~Daisy-X-Bowser Jan 18, 2013, 6:53:48 AM

✿ How do I start?

It's really good because it's your art; art is your interpretation of things in life, and this is your interpretation of Daisy (more her colour scheme than the drawing because that was by me

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✿ I would say my favourite part would be Daisy's dress and her pendants. Her face is a little strange because of her eyes as they might have looked better if they'd had a white part in them. I'm wondering what happened to Daisy's hair near her left earring because I think she must have got some highlights there!

But it's good and I like the way that you did the crown on her head. ✿

✿ I gave the deviation a 4 for vision because the yellow mixes with the dress, maybe you could have drawn lines to stop the colour flooding the whole image? ✿
✿ I gave the deviation 3.5 for originality, but that's because it's a Mario character and that's the same slogan as one of the Peach T-Shirts (so I'd get that for my lineart too!

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✿ I gave 3.5 for technique because there are a few tweaks you could make to the image, but they're mostly just the background mixing with the dress

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✿ And lastly, I put 4.5 for the impact because I find it's very good in my opinion!

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✿ And thanks for leaving the copyright thing in the corner of her dress XD ✿

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Critique by !no1samusfan Jan 17, 2013, 3:47:09 PM

Let me start by saying that this is a very good piece

. I like how the edges are nice and clean, and its realistic that if Daisy got captured again that she would save herself. But I have to say, that the eye whites could've been white, and the holes in the letters could've matched the background. But this is a really good piece of art. It is also very nice of you how you left the copyright stamp on the drawing

The colors are exactly right, every detail of the dress and the gloves is correct. Again, this is really good